Feb. 13, 2009
Cache Valley Area Investors Association
President and founder
160 N. Main St.
cachevaia@gmail.com
http://www.cvaia.com/
Gaining Financial Independence in a Bind
If people learn the right mentality and approaches to investing, they can all be successful in what they desire. People should be able to spend their time doing something they love, not just as job that provides an income. Passive Income largely makes this possible. CVAIA teaches people how to increase passive income. CVAIA embraces the three things that all people can invest: time, assets and experience.
With a listed amount of 80 members and a Facebook group, CVAIA has found their members achieve independence between 3--15 years. Parker said, “You want to invest in income that requires no thought. With planning and a lot of education, it can happen.” People should love their job and CVAIA makes that happen.
They practice the methods found in the ideologies of books including: Rich Dad Poor Dad, The Wealthy Barber, The Millionaire Next Door, Atlas Shrugged, the Automatic Millionaire and The Secret. CVAIA began in August 2007 and now has members from many geographical locations and from all walks of life. The members come together with the same belief: that education mitigates the risks of investing. They meet every other Thursday in the Logan City Chamber of Commerce at 7 p.m. Their meetings are open for everyone.
Joshua Rosen
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idont think "president and founder" was necessary up on top, because it doesnt make any sense.overall you did a good job.
ReplyDeleteThe president and founder's name belongs in the top contact info, not the association. CHoose to capitalize his title(s) or not, but don't do both.
ReplyDeleteRemember this is a cause-promotion press release...the headline and lead should focus on the cause. The fact that CVAIA supports this cause is additonal material ... important, but additional, so it belongs after the lead.
Capitalize all words in your heading.
Add a space before your parentheses.
Parker's quote supports the lead paragraph. It shouldnt be part of it.
Parker started this association to help other's achieve the goals of the cause, not really his own goals or goals of others. he happens to subscribe to a philosophy set forth by others.
Your second paragraph is the philosophy. You need to present it before your supporting material.
I don't know what you mean by "listed amount." Please clarify.
The boilerplate was supplied to you verbatum ... where is it?
CVAIA does not make people love their jobs, like you make it sound. Restate what you mean there.