Burger Planet
123 Lakerway
Gary IN, 87265
801-258-1812
http://www.burgerplanet.com/
A New Healthy Lifestyle of Foods
Women have new healthy options at Burger Planet
Women have new healthy options at Burger Planet
GARY, Ind.-- Burger Planet has new healthy options of food, in addition to their existing menu, for the growing awareness of healthy eating.
In recent research, there has been a growing amount of awareness of healthy eating. Burger Planet has always had their customers needs and wants in mind. With the help of Jayne Petersen, a fitness sensation helping Opal Witcomb lose 75 pounds, Burger Planet plans a tour of healthy eating across the nation. “I believe women need more options to become and stay healthy,” Peterson said, “I love Burger Planet food. It is healthy and everyone loves. No one I have met doesn’t like their food and customer service.”
The new healthy options include salads options with less than 500 calories, grilled chicken sandwiches with the option of a bun or no bun for calorie counters. They also have the option of using lettuce for those who aren’t counting, just eating. Tiffany Johnson, a loyal customer said, “I didn’t like to eat out because I was self-conscious of my weight. Now, I can be just like everyone else and not have to worry about how much grease is in one bite.”
James E. Muellenbach III, CEO of the company said, “We have been in business long enough to know that our business is looking out for it’s customers. If healthy desires and choice is what they want, not only will we offer it, but we will promote healthy living as well.”
Petersen and Corny the Clown will be in 15 major cities around the nation to promote healthy living and their new healthy line. Burger Planet will not remove any of their classic options such as The Saturn. It has 8,921 franchises in every state and 17 countries. It has served up to 52 billion customers and counting.
Joshua Rosen
Communications VP
Joshua.Rosen@burgerplanet.com
435-213-5050
Joshua Rosen
Communications VP
Joshua.Rosen@burgerplanet.com
435-213-5050
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Josh great start, I found a few minor mistakes with grammar. In your second paragraph the quote is missing an "it" at the end of the sentence. Also in your quote from the CEO, you should use its without the apostrophe. Sorry if this is small stupid stuff, but this is what I usually end up missing a lot of points on.
ReplyDeletegood job josh..i think the choice of words was very simple and easy to understand..and it was convincing
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